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In flux comes comfort

Leaves soon change
Approach of season
Colors in vast range
Humanity seeks reason

Shadows fall across
Life seems broken
Greater is their loss
Harsh words bespoken

Find not the same
Break the  cycle quick
Rules found in game
Follow as clock ticks

Light shines and opens
Heart finds equal ground
Strong remains hoping
The comfort stays around

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Bodhirose said…
Hi Paulo...thanks for coming by. I enjoyed your poem...life is constantly in flux...it's nice to find some comfort within it all...as we can find it.

Hey, would you be interested in joining in with dVerse Poets and get some more traffic over here? I can't recall if you've joined in before...just thought I would extend the invitation...everyone is welcome. It's a nice group of people.

Gayle ~
8/28/12, 9:14 PM
Paulog30 said…
Thanks, I will look into it thank you!
8/29/12, 12:20 PM
Brian Miller said…
nice....thanks for pointing him over...i like that this makes one think when they read it...and i agree on the comfort being a nice thing to find on the trip around the cycle...
8/29/12, 1:52 PM
Paulog30 said…
Thank you very much, had a friend in mind when I wrote this. Had some bad times in her life, but is slowly getting back to a comfortable state of mind.
8/29/12, 2:01 PM
Claudia said…
i like the heart finding equal ground.. for me this has a peaceful feel to it... and welcome at dVerse..
8/29/12, 3:02 PM
Serena said…
I'm happy you went over to d'Verse or I wouldn't have found this. Lovely poem. I especially loved the last stanza.
8/29/12, 8:49 PM
Paulog30 said…
Thank you so much. I am going to try and post here more often, :). Read many good poems so far!
8/29/12, 8:52 PM
Madeleine Begun Kane said…
Lovely poem, indeed. Powerful, as well.
8/30/12, 2:04 AM
Paulog30 said…
Thank you so much, :).
8/30/12, 2:08 AM
Paulog30 said…
Thank you, I enjoyed your poem as well, :).
8/30/12, 12:53 PM
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