So you want to be a model!

Spindle sticks, taking
Long trips to dark places.
Escaping energy displacement,
Into fluid containment.

Comments

awesome imagery.
happy Rally.
Paulog30 said…
Many thanks, this simple verse tells it all.
Rajlakshmi said…
powerful verses...
such a thoughtful write.

Thursday Rally
Anonymous said…
intriging to say the least! NICE !
Paulog30 said…
Trying to show the darkside of modeling! Buwahahahaha
Anonymous said…
You accomplished your goal! Spindly sticks for sure.
Anonymous said…
A trap laced w/ honey-- interesting viewpoint here.
Paulog30 said…
thanks Vinay!
Anonymous said…
Fantastic! though now every time I build a campfire I may get paranoid that the police will mistake it for an attempted arson of a "Victoria's Secret" photo shoot.....
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Paulog30 said…
Thanks Ab, loved your latest poeem, was not sure how to respond to it! Was out of this world! Thanks Jingle, I will finish asap!
K. Shawn Edgar said…
Tight. Like fire consuming air.
Paulog30 said…
Many thanks!
Esteban said…
who in the world
made that the standard
u have to be built
like young boys
on spindle sticks

yeah

the dark side
is
the eating disorders

good poem
my brother

peace
este
Paulog30 said…
Thank you much, I will check out your site in the morn, I need sleep. This is only one part, but the worst part of modeling. It is a cruel world I am sure. These shows like top model sicken me to no end!