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So you want to be a model!

Spindle sticks, taking
Long trips to dark places.
Escaping energy displacement,
Into fluid containment.
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Hyde Park Poetry Palace said…
awesome imagery.
happy Rally.
3/24/11, 12:23 PM
Paulog30 said…
Many thanks, this simple verse tells it all.
3/24/11, 1:28 PM
Rajlakshmi said…
powerful verses...
such a thoughtful write.

Thursday Rally
3/24/11, 3:36 PM
Anonymous said…
intriging to say the least! NICE !
3/24/11, 5:21 PM
Paulog30 said…
Trying to show the darkside of modeling! Buwahahahaha
3/24/11, 6:37 PM
Anonymous said…
You accomplished your goal! Spindly sticks for sure.
3/24/11, 9:34 PM
Anonymous said…
A trap laced w/ honey-- interesting viewpoint here.
3/25/11, 2:21 PM
Paulog30 said…
thanks Vinay!
3/26/11, 10:12 AM
Anonymous said…
Fantastic! though now every time I build a campfire I may get paranoid that the police will mistake it for an attempted arson of a "Victoria's Secret" photo shoot.....
3/26/11, 11:07 AM
Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said…
how is your day?

please find time visiting poets who were here for you but you did not visit yet..

Thanks..

have fun. :)

let us know after you are done 18 visiting...
3/26/11, 2:32 PM
Paulog30 said…
Thanks Ab, loved your latest poeem, was not sure how to respond to it! Was out of this world! Thanks Jingle, I will finish asap!
3/26/11, 7:07 PM
K. Shawn Edgar said…
Tight. Like fire consuming air.
3/27/11, 2:56 AM
Paulog30 said…
Many thanks!
3/27/11, 12:25 PM
Esteban said…
who in the world
made that the standard
u have to be built
like young boys
on spindle sticks

yeah

the dark side
is
the eating disorders

good poem
my brother

peace
este
4/2/11, 2:04 AM
Paulog30 said…
Thank you much, I will check out your site in the morn, I need sleep. This is only one part, but the worst part of modeling. It is a cruel world I am sure. These shows like top model sicken me to no end!
4/2/11, 2:30 AM
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