Today's Haiku

Hidden among clouds
Fade into background beyond
Flesh weak in caress







Written for the Haiku challenge

Comments

Anonymous said…
Yummy..."flesh weak in caress." A beautiful approach.

Shalom,
http://cloakedmonk.com/2011/02/10/hiding/
Sarah malik said…
nice, nice...the last line beautifies the haiku more..but y haven't u put up the image..its so beautiful?

sarah
Paulog30 said…
True, true. Guess I should,lol.
Bing Yap said…
"flesh weak in caress"... lovely words!

http://pinklady-bing.blogspot.com/2011/02/longing-for-you.html
stunning,
love your take.
superb imagery.
Paulog30 said…
Thank you everyone!
Loved it.. 'Flesh weak in caress'..

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Paulog30 said…
Thank you, everybody likes that last line,lol! Right on!