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Today's Haiku

Hidden among clouds
Fade into background beyond
Flesh weak in caress







Written for the Haiku challenge
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Anonymous said…
Yummy..."flesh weak in caress." A beautiful approach.

Shalom,
http://cloakedmonk.com/2011/02/10/hiding/
2/10/11, 9:40 AM
Sarah malik said…
nice, nice...the last line beautifies the haiku more..but y haven't u put up the image..its so beautiful?

sarah
2/10/11, 9:58 AM
Paulog30 said…
True, true. Guess I should,lol.
2/10/11, 10:31 AM
Bing Yap said…
"flesh weak in caress"... lovely words!

http://pinklady-bing.blogspot.com/2011/02/longing-for-you.html
2/10/11, 10:55 AM
Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said…
stunning,
love your take.
superb imagery.
2/10/11, 11:05 AM
Paulog30 said…
Thank you everyone!
2/10/11, 11:11 AM
Someone is Special said…
Loved it.. 'Flesh weak in caress'..

Someone is Special
2/12/11, 12:53 AM
Paulog30 said…
Thank you, everybody likes that last line,lol! Right on!
2/12/11, 1:02 AM
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