Today's Haiku for Haiku Heights theme: Color

Posted by Paulog30 September 01, 2012

Today's Haiku for Haiku Heights theme: Color

Illusion-
Its not really
There man

http://haiku-heights.blogspot.in/2012/09/september-heights-day02-p161-color.html?m=1

Comments

Pranita said…

Interesting take on d prompt!

God power vibrates within!

9/1/12, 3:10 PM

Paulog30 said…

The Illusion of a rainbow after a rainstorm on a sunny day.The color appears due to the reflective raindrops, but hides again when clear.

9/1/12, 3:18 PM

Ramesh Sood said…

Something different...unique.. RS:)

9/1/12, 3:19 PM

Paulog30 said…

Thank you Ramesh, :).

9/1/12, 3:28 PM

Barbara said…

Who know what is real and what is illusion? I like your take on this prompt.

9/1/12, 3:40 PM

Grace said…

Nice thoughts but I don't see the haiku spirit here. I thought it would have been better if you gave it a clear image of illusion ~ Hope you don't mind ~

9/1/12, 3:41 PM

Paulog30 said…

True, more of a senryu.

9/1/12, 3:56 PM

Paulog30 said…

Thanks Barbara.

9/1/12, 3:57 PM

Gemma Wiseman said…

Intriguing spin on the prompt! Colours are indeed an illusion of light drama!

9/1/12, 5:33 PM

Paulog30 said…

Thank you Gemma,:).

9/1/12, 6:16 PM

Ellecee said…

I like your unique approach. Fuel for thought.

9/1/12, 7:27 PM

Paulog30 said…

Thanks Ellecee

9/1/12, 7:39 PM

Chèvrefeuille said…

Hm ... a different interpretation of the prompt color. I had some problems to adjust to this one, but ... yes I saw the picture rising in front of my mind and saw the colorful illusion of a Fata Morgana.
Really a nice one.

9/1/12, 9:32 PM

Paulog30 said…

Thanks, I went a little abstract with this one.

9/1/12, 9:51 PM