Awake Among the New

Loom upon which anger spins
Falter not in productive mire
Brighten grin across the voided sin
Force not until the point of perspire

Darkness hovers as the blanket makes
Light incinerates fallible negation
Exulted feelings feed then take
Path discovered in prominent elation

Comments

Very intense. Well done.
Paulog30 said…
Thanks!! I busted out the thesaurus for this one, lol!