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There She Weeps

There she weeps

Alone on the

Edge of loneliness

To jump far

Into the night

Masquerade


My hands

Soft upon the

Landing of

Your heart

In shambles

Needing repair


Fix this puzzle

Board emotion

Palette

And paint the

Picture of one


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robin said…
nice image painted...
6/6/12, 6:47 PM
Paulog30 said…
Thank you very much. Not my usual theme, but I like to change things up.
6/6/12, 7:07 PM
Paulog30 said…
Thank you very much
6/7/12, 11:44 AM
Paulog30 said…
Thanks, that stood out to me too when I wrote it.
6/7/12, 11:45 AM
Anonymous said…
I like the style you've written it in. The emotions come through. I like that you haven't fully polished it. It came directly from your swimming mind.
9/6/12, 11:38 AM
Paulog30 said…
Thank you very much, I poured myself into this one for sure!
9/7/12, 2:03 AM
The Poet said…
Hello.
It's nice when two become one in perfect harmony. Nice imagery and flow. Thanks for sharing.

This Plunderous World
9/7/12, 10:08 PM
Paulog30 said…
Thank you!!!
9/8/12, 12:09 AM
Hyde Park Poetry Palace said…
http://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/2012/09/the-perfect-poet-award-week-72.html

an award for you, let us know after you take it, nominate another poet for week 73.
9/14/12, 12:37 PM
Paulog30 said…
thanks, I accepted
9/19/12, 1:03 PM
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