Nefilim Descend

Posted by Paulog30 May 09, 2012

Nefilim Descend

Barren rock

On love brought

Forth

Within the

Age of emptiness

They came

Chariot blazing

From 12th planet

To test the

Waters of new

The frost waits

Upon which the

House was built

Work stands tall

The order to

Engaged

Hold strong the

Meeting of

The twelve

For here lies

The vein of

Creation

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Comments

rosemary mint said…

Excellent. Enjoyed this very much.

6/7/12, 8:46 PM

Paulog30 said…

Thank you, I wrote it after reading, The 12th Planet.

6/7/12, 8:51 PM

Chazinator said…

Your rendering of this scene is very evocative, spare and clear its words shape the silence in a very compelling way.

6/7/12, 9:59 PM

adan said…

interesting sequence, very building; esp liked,

"Within the

Age of emptiness

They came"

thanks so much ;-)

6/7/12, 10:28 PM

Brian Miller said…

interesting....have not read that book, will have to check it out...leaving your own planet for the promise of new...i imagine it much like the journey of the first settlers to the new world...i am intrigued by the meeting of the 12...and the vein of creation is a cool turn of phrase...

6/7/12, 10:38 PM

Paulog30 said…

Many thanks, I try.

6/7/12, 10:53 PM

Paulog30 said…

No, thank you, :).

6/7/12, 10:54 PM

Paulog30 said…

It is amazing, especially all the cylinder seals and other visual aspects that show were many of our modern and ancient religions were adapted from.

6/7/12, 10:55 PM