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Leaves float as hummingbird wings

The assortment of vibrance in Autumn sky

And Past warmth together sings

Love lost has fallen by


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Anonymous said…
last line gave me pause, still thinking it through :) which I like to do, hey! that rhymes too lol
happy potluck!

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11/7/11, 2:36 PM
Pat-Mather Brown Gordon-ceton said…
very lovely one,
enjoyed the last line.

:)
11/7/11, 2:38 PM
Paulog30 said…
Thank you so much, working on doing more Quatrains and other styles.
11/7/11, 6:22 PM
Blossom Vydrina said…
I love autumn's colors, leaves like hummingbird wings...
11/8/11, 1:59 AM
Paulog30 said…
Many thanks Vydrina! :)
11/8/11, 12:14 PM
Maggie Patti Barbara Frankford-Walton said…
welcome join poets rally today.

keep writing, we valued your inputs.

:)
11/10/11, 1:36 PM
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