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Tanka for March Challenge-Patterns (http://cloakedmonk.com)

Day bring forth patterns,
Ones which are parts of our lives.
Wake, use bathroom, and
Consume nourishment. Break this,
And a mind may wander quick.

Written for the March Challenge at http://cloakedmonk.com
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Anonymous said…
A wonderful commentary on the necessary elements to starting our day. I am seeing a double play in "break." Break this & break fast?
3/13/11, 6:55 PM
Anonymous said…
This is cool - the mundane pattern human life takes at the very core!
3/13/11, 7:03 PM
Paulog30 said…
It is mundane, yet, necessary! I did not see that pattern, but thanks for revealing it!
3/13/11, 9:18 PM
Mike and Sandy Patrick said…
I was afraid you had been staring at too many patterns flashing past on the slot machines to be able to write, but you held to your writing pattern. Well done.
3/14/11, 2:09 PM
Paulog30 said…
Funny you say that, when I play I am always looking for the bonus reels to pass by and stop it on time. Thanks for the comment!
3/14/11, 3:20 PM
Anonymous said…
well done ... normal to delightful ... cleverly penned ... becca
3/14/11, 3:42 PM
Paulog30 said…
Thanks Becca!
3/14/11, 7:08 PM
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