Haiku for the March challenge-Family (http://cloakedmonk.com)

There for all the pain
and misery, never so
perfect, but still there.

Written for the March challenge at http://cloakedmonk.com

Comments

Paulog30 said…
Yeah, it sucks, but kids who have been raised with violence/lying/stealing, at an early age are sooo impressionable. Sucks! I see some of the stupid things i say, repeated from my daughter, not a good feeling.
It is sometimes a surprise when they hang in there through the bad times, but that is family.
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vivinfrance said…
still there: that is the crux of family. Lovely haiku.
Anonymous said…
Nice haiku and aptly put.