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Haiku for the March challenge-Abundance

As I opened my
heart, you entered preciously.
My small reflection.




My love for my daughter is extremely abundant. I divorced about 3 years ago and was blessed to have custody. I am not the perfect dad, but she makes me feel that way!!!

Written for the March challenge at http://cloakedmonk.com
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Celestial Dreamz said…
that's such an endearing write :) God bless you both.
3/8/11, 12:00 AM
Reflections said…
You have an abundance of love... that is all you need to get through it all, together in blessings.
3/8/11, 12:44 AM
Paulog30 said…
Thanks, she is my heart indeed.
3/8/11, 12:48 AM
vivinfrance said…
Endearing is the mot juste for this poem. Good for you, and keep loving.
3/8/11, 7:27 AM
Paulog30 said…
Thanks viv!
3/8/11, 10:19 AM
Anonymous said…
Fantastic, a wonderful tribute to a child.
3/8/11, 10:50 AM
Margaret said…
Yes, a child loves despite all our flaws. Very sweet!
3/8/11, 12:55 PM
Mike and Sandy Patrick said…
"My small reflection." Paulo, that is the perfect description, spoken with so much pride, for a beautiful relationship.
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3/8/11, 1:01 PM
Paulog30 said…
Thank yo all, children are a wonder and delight!
3/8/11, 1:30 PM
patcegan said…
How blessed you both are to have each other. Lovely poem, lovely tribute to your love for your daughter! hugs, pat
3/8/11, 1:36 PM
Paulog30 said…
Thank you Pat!
3/8/11, 2:17 PM
Anonymous said…
This is awesome tribute to your daughter ... "you entered preciously ..." Delightful! There is nothing like a dad's love!! ~becca
3/8/11, 6:15 PM
Anonymous said…
Lovely! And much better than what I call my daughter..."mini me." A fitting tribute to parenthood.
3/8/11, 11:32 PM
Paulog30 said…
Hahaha, mini me is cute! "Just the two of us, we can make it if we try, just the two of us, you and I."
3/8/11, 11:35 PM
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