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For Haiku Heights prompt #34-Wings

I sat down upon
The field, watching a bluejay
Eat its food quickly.

Written for www.haikuheights.blogspot.com
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Anonymous said…
Perfect visual for those longing for spring. Thank you!
3/12/11, 10:37 PM
Amanda Moore said…
this is very sweet I can imagine the Jay eating and scolding all those that try to take it!
3/12/11, 11:31 PM
Paulog30 said…
Thanks, wanted to do something based in nature, more traditional.
3/13/11, 1:48 AM
Nanka said…
Can picture this bird and looks possessive about its food ;) I agree with Amanda about its expression!! :)
3/13/11, 3:51 AM
Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said…
lovely observation, the imagery is superb.
3/13/11, 2:11 PM
Paulog30 said…
Thanks Jingle, that is the wonder of haiku! Its may favorite style!
3/13/11, 5:35 PM
Paulog30 said…
Haiku is very Zen. It is what it is, a description of one's interpretation of nature. So cool!
3/14/11, 2:02 AM
Hyde Park Poetry Palace said…
Zen piece indeed.
masterful job.
3/17/11, 9:30 PM
Paulog30 said…
Thank you, nature gives us so many choices in creation of artof any form, wonderful!
3/17/11, 10:18 PM
Paulog30 said…
Hey, nature is what it is, no different than what humans do!
3/19/11, 1:02 AM
Vinay Leo R. said…
waiting to just spread the wings and fly off with it too I think :) nice one..!
3/21/11, 2:36 PM
Paulog30 said…
Many thanks!!!
3/21/11, 3:38 PM
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