Today's Haiku for Haiku Challenge-Ravel

Posted by Paulog30 February 17, 2011

Today's Haiku for Haiku Challenge-Ravel

Tangled the web is
Caught like so much flies in death
Turn down the bed now

Photo by Allen Matheson

Comments

Anonymous said…

wow! the pic is awesome, is it one of yours as well!!!!

intersting H-ku :)

2/17/11, 12:39 PM

Kristen Haskell said…

That is an interesting Haiku. The photo is amazing and together they really work well.

2/17/11, 1:41 PM

Paulog30 said…

I wish it was my pic, forgot to add the photographer. Gonna do that now.

2/17/11, 2:32 PM

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said…

love your take.
well done.

2/17/11, 2:56 PM

Paulog30 said…

Thank you Jingle!

2/17/11, 3:12 PM

Anonymous said…

woww!!! that last line just jumped at me, B!!! Loved how you wrote it!! A really superb haiku!!

2/17/11, 4:13 PM

Paulog30 said…

Niiiicccee! That is what I was hoping would happen! I love causing the emotions to explode! It can be hard with haiku, your given a small slate to fill with large amounts of deep meaning. I think I go a different way than some of the other writers with the theme. I tend to emote the darker side of life, that is just my style,lol!

2/17/11, 5:44 PM