Today's Haiku for the Haiku Challenge-Haze

Held back by the wall
The words fight the fury strong
Behold, haiku born


http://www.fotosearch.com/photos-images/haziness.html

Comments

That is a mighty battle, Paulo, and well worth the fight. Love it.
Mike
http://thepoetsquill.wordpress.com/
Anonymous said…
Quite a difficult birth you have described! Very nice.
Paulog30 said…
Thank you both! Sometimes the haze is strong when looking for the poem to emerge!
Anonymous said…
Powerful apt description of the challenge we face to create an image with only 17 syllables. Nice job with the prompt ... Thanks for sharing ~ becca ~

http://beccagivens.wordpress.com/2011/02/25/through-the-haze/
magical in some way.
Thanks.
Paulog30 said…
Thanks and welcome!
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Anonymous said…
Very clever, Paulo--I so enjoyed this!
Paulog30 said…
Thanks, I was going for tricky imagery to reach the final conclusion! The wonder of poetry!