Today's Haiku for the Haiku Challenge-Bliss

On shoulder I weep
Heavy the heart on this day
With you bliss will come

Comments

eyeography said…
Wow...great work with the prompt :)
Paulog30 said…
Again thank you! This was also written for my girlfriend, and I was having an annoying day at work! Poetry is the best therapy!
Anonymous said…
Touching aspect of a powerful relationship ... knowing, no matter what the day/life brings - you can find solace with a loved one ... Thank you for sharing!
~becca~

http://beccagivens.wordpress.com/2011/02/21/no-alarms/
Aww, Paulo. I love seeing your romantic side. Beautiful.
Anonymous said…
Very true words for best friends or soul mate !
Anonymous said…
And true for our relationship with the divine. Wonderful.
Paulog30 said…
Thank you everyone, not my usual focus of writing, but, felt all mushy yesterday,lol!
yes, bliss will come and your mood will light up.
:)
Nanka said…
Very poignant and evoking a sense of sadness too!!
Paulog30 said…
Indeed a mixed bag of emotion.
Poignant take on the theme.. Thanks Buddha..

Someone is Special
Anonymous said…
It's nice to have a shoulder to cry on when we may need it. Very sweet, Paulo--thank you.
Paulog30 said…
Your welcome