Seeking the factors of the subconscious (Poets Rally Week 38)

Cusp, on edge of fantasy.
Cowers low upon the synapse.
The tunnel vision blinds fantastic,
yet the picture reveals itself.

Running across the mind track,
forgetting nothing inside a mystery.
Profound and lost eternity sound,
quieted under the image found.

When attracting space perverted,
kill the past for future willfulness.
Explosive, the natural being
hits hard through the glass of darkness.

It has come for presentation,
loud and extravagant touching
the outer world.


The truth has given clarity.





Written for the Poets Rally Week 38!!

Comments

Very profound, Paulo. Another in a lengthening stream of thoughtful poetry.
Mike
http://thepoetsquill.wordpress.com/
Paulog30 said…
Thanks Mike, this is what comes to me these past years, I am always evolving. Started writing in high school at 15 and have not stopped since. I did actually get rid of a lot of my old stuff (actually emulated what Jim Morrison had done, big fan). I like your fascination with science; mine is not as huge as yours, but i try to learn more about the Earth and its wonders through documentaries. My favorite is, "How the earth was Made."
Paulog30 said…
Also, love documentaries on the evolution of man, Ape to man and walking with cavemen are my favs!!
true sentiments,

you are very brilliant about things.
Cheers.
Paulog30 said…
Thanks much Jingle!
Anonymous said…
love the last line.. here's my wk 38.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/09/30/i-cant-hold-it/
Anonymous said…
Loved the flow and the last line is definitely a pinnacle of "a-ha-ism"!
Paulog30 said…
Thanks, I think,hahahaha!
Brian Miller said…
kill the past or future willfulness...yeah that line struck me...nice bit of truth that you spin...